Shorts Factory
Long format → 10-30 shorts, formats variés, bannières-angles. Tes sous-titres restent.
Challenge musique : shorts masterises · 1 passage · 2min 📱Flip siège : montages de Frank, son remasterisé · 1 passage · 4min 🖥Sell item : version carrée longue · 1 passage · 4min 🖥Vidéo 100 ans : habillage chiffres · 1 passage · 0min 🖥Challenge flip siège : shorts 1:1 + POV · 1 passage · 4min 🖥Recette virale (test 18/09) · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 4 : sélection par événement · 1 passage · 9min 📱Challenge 5 : montés à la main · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 5 : le clip (salve 3) · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 5 : le clip (salve 2) · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 5 : le clip · 1 passage · 8min 📱4TH PORTRAIT FINALL.mp4 · 1 passage · 9min 📱3RD VIDEO FINAL LONG FORMAT LAST.mp4 · 1 passage · 7min 📱FINAL EXPORT VID 2 LONG FORMAT .mp4 · 9 passages · 9min 📱lastedityeahyeah1stvid.mp4 · 2 passages · 12min 📱voir par lotvoir les 11 anciens lots
19shorts
0gardés
16à trier
6.2QC moyen
0triés en tout
Two days pitching tourists, zero clients. So I called their guides.
ouverture 7.8/1024s
Ouverture : Stakes chiffrés, banner plat mais lisible.
Nobody booked. Then one of them wrote me the next day.
ouverture 7.3/1038s
Ouverture : Promesse de retournement, banner sans qui.
I interrupted their terrace lunch to pitch my guide idea
ouverture 5.8/1028s
Ouverture : Situation lisible mais pas d'enjeu chiffré.
"Sounds cool" they said, before I named my price
conceptshape B — brush-offs stacked in rhythmQC 7/10ouverture 8.3/1014s
(original)
Rapid-fire montage of Frank getting deflected mid-sentence, back to back, on day one. | payoff: €40 an hour for a filmed tour. Nobody lets me finish the sentence.
Juge : scrollStop 7 · originality 6 · payoff 7 · outcome 7 · conflict 8 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Prix et sujet nets, twist du titre puissant.
⚠ Finir sur 'go meet people though' en gros overlay, couper la queue.
Their food is on the table when I start my pitch
variant-self-roastprice-drop then polite exitQC 7.9/10ouverture 8.0/1012s
(self-roast)
A group of twelve tourists, one obvious sale, and a number that keeps falling until it means nothing. | payoff: Twelve tourists, three euros a head, and they were too hungry to hear it.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 7 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 9 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Chiffre + issue négative, compteur d'échec fort.
⚠ Cut hook to 5s and land on 'hope you can find someone' by 20s.
every stranger said yes. politely.
variant-self-roastaccumulating-yes counterQC 8.7/10ouverture 7.3/109s
(self-roast)
Count the polite yeses stacking up in one 25-second conversation, then land on what those yeses were actually worth. | payoff: a polite yes and a no cost the same.
Juge : scrollStop 9 · originality 9 · payoff 9 · outcome 9 · conflict 7 · shareability 9
Ouverture : Banner autonome livre le twist, mais spoile le titre.
⚠ Freeze on 'Five yeses. Zero bookings.' — no CTA card over it, add CTA after a beat.
I counted how many times they said yes 👀
conceptaccumulating-yes counterQC 8.7/10ouverture 7.3/1016s
(original)
Count the polite yeses stacking up in one 25-second conversation, then land on what those yeses were actually worth. | payoff: Four yeses in one chat, and not one of them booked.
Juge : scrollStop 9 · originality 9 · payoff 9 · outcome 9 · conflict 7 · shareability 9
Ouverture : Couple répété, lisible et clair.
⚠ Freeze on 'Five yeses. Zero bookings.' — no CTA card over it, add CTA after a beat.
"Sounds cool", but will the Polish tourists actually say yes?
conceptPOV-buyer-holds-the-punchlineQC 8.1/10ouverture 7.3/1011s
(original)
POV: a stranger walks up to you in Budapest and offers to film your day — while your best friend, standing next to you, is literally a professional photographer. | payoff: Two pitches in a row, two polite "sounds cool", zero people who actually book.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 8 · payoff 9 · outcome 7 · conflict 8 · shareability 9
Ouverture : Cible ethnique concrète, banner explicite.
⚠ Overlay 'her friend is a photographer' at s2 — viewer must hold the punchline before he does.
"Sounds cool", but he said it before I named my price
conceptpremature-yes then price revealQC 7.5/10ouverture 7.3/1012s
(original)
An outdoor stranger validates the idea out loud — before he knows what it costs. | payoff: Easy yes when the number is still hidden.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 7 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 6 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Concept lisible, léger manque de chiffre dans le banner.
⚠ End on 'sounds cool — before I said the price' silence; drop the WhatsApp beat.
I pitch two strangers a filmed tour : watch their faces at the price.
conceptbefore/after one encounter: nod, then siQC 7/10ouverture 7.3/1014s
(original)
The compliment lives 2 seconds. The moment a number lands, same guy has nothing to say. | payoff: The compliment doesn't survive the number.
Juge : scrollStop 7 · originality 6 · payoff 7 · outcome 8 · conflict 7 · shareability 6
Ouverture : Titre long, bannière incomplète sur le twist.
⚠ Couper le setup à 4s max, aller direct au silence après le prix.
Three euros each if you're twelve, I pitch strangers a group tour
conceptgap réparé en une secondeQC 5.2/10ouverture 7.0/1017s
(original)
Un groupe croit à une visite gratuite. Une phrase suffit à casser le malentendu. | payoff: Le prix tombe à 3€. Ils s'en vont quand même.
Juge : scrollStop 5 · originality 5 · payoff 6 · outcome 5 · conflict 6 · shareability 4
Ouverture : Deux offres empilées, un peu chargé pour un banner.
⚠ Ouvrir sur 'This is free' du touriste, pas sur le pitch de Frank.
Pitching my weird job to strangers in Budapest, did he actually agree?
conceptLong setup, disproportionate cut-offQC 5.2/10ouverture 6.8/1025s
(original)
Pitch soigné à une table de café, coupé par deux mots avant même le prix. | payoff: coupé au deuxième mot.
Juge : scrollStop 5 · originality 4 · payoff 6 · outcome 5 · conflict 7 · shareability 4
Ouverture : Question intrigue mais banner descriptif sans enjeu.
⚠ Cut setup to 8s; the slam needs to land before viewers scroll.
Group of 12, I try a 3€ each pitch
conceptprice-drop then polite exitQC 7.9/10ouverture 6.5/1014s
(original)
A group of twelve tourists, one obvious sale, and a number that keeps falling until it means nothing. | payoff: They said they were going to eat.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 7 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 9 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Bannière imagée, offre imprécise sur le prix.
⚠ Cut hook to 5s and land on 'hope you can find someone' by 20s.
Twelve tourists, one pitch, right before dinner
conceptzoom on the fumbled money revealQC 7.9/10ouverture 6.5/1014s
(original)
The moment a salesman opens with 'it's not free, but' — and you can hear the whole pitch collapsing. | payoff: Cheapest tour in Budapest, beaten by lunch.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 7 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 8 · shareability 8
Ouverture : Bannière minimale, aucune offre nommée.
⚠ Zoom son sur « it's not free, but… », couper le préambule espagnol.
Twelve strangers, three euros each, and I'm hungry too
conceptzoom on the fumbled money revealQC 7.9/10ouverture 6.5/1019s
(original)
The moment a salesman opens with 'it's not free, but' — and you can hear the whole pitch collapsing. | payoff: 3€ each and still beaten by lunch.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 7 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 8 · shareability 8
Ouverture : Chiffres concrets banner flou.
⚠ Zoom son sur « it's not free, but… », couper le préambule espagnol.
Sounds cool, he said, then I named my price
conceptRhythmic repetition of one line across tQC 6.8/10ouverture 6.3/1015s
(original)
Same opening line, six strangers, until it stops sounding like a pitch and starts sounding like a plea. | payoff: Same words, new stranger, same nothing.
Juge : scrollStop 7 · originality 8 · payoff 6 · outcome 6 · conflict 7 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Enjeu clair mais manque le métier ou le lieu.
⚠ Show all 6 takes in rapid montage — the repetition IS the payoff.
HE ONLY HAS ONE PITCH 💀
conceptRhythmic repetition of one line across tQC 6.8/10ouverture 6.3/1015s
(original)
Same opening line, six strangers, until it stops sounding like a pitch and starts sounding like a plea. | payoff: one pitch, on repeat.
Juge : scrollStop 7 · originality 8 · payoff 6 · outcome 6 · conflict 7 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Emoji porte l'idée mais concept reste vague sans son.
⚠ Show all 6 takes in rapid montage — the repetition IS the payoff.
Sounds cool, he said, then I named the price
conceptpitch chaud → excuse absurde → contre-ofQC 7.6/10ouverture 6.0/1013s
(original)
Il pitche une visite guidée filmée. L'excuse tombe : « on a 24 heures et la chambre est déjà remplie ». | payoff: apparently a hotel room can be full of memories.
Juge : scrollStop 7 · originality 8 · payoff 8 · outcome 7 · conflict 8 · shareability 8
Ouverture : Titre spoile, bannière neutre sans enjeu.
⚠ Ancre 'chambre déjà remplie' en overlay à l'instant exact — c'est l'anomalie qui fait partager.
'Sounds cool' : read his face, not his words
concepthold-on-listener-face after polite yesQC 7.9/10ouverture 4.5/108s
(original)
On tient la caméra sur le visage de l'inconnu pendant qu'il dit 'sounds cool', puis on laisse le silence après le prix : ce que son corps répond n'a rien à voir avec ce que sa bouche dit. | payoff: 'Sounds cool' + silence + un WhatsApp donné dans le vide.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 9 · payoff 7 · outcome 7 · conflict 8 · shareability 9
Ouverture : Banner coupé, 'per-hour price' flou hors contexte.
⚠ Bandeau: 'regarde son visage, pas ses mots' dès 0s.