Shorts Factory
Long format → 10-30 shorts, formats variés, bannières-angles. Tes sous-titres restent.
Challenge musique : shorts masterises · 1 passage · 2min 📱Flip siège : montages de Frank, son remasterisé · 1 passage · 4min 🖥Sell item : version carrée longue · 1 passage · 4min 🖥Vidéo 100 ans : habillage chiffres · 1 passage · 0min 🖥Challenge flip siège : shorts 1:1 + POV · 1 passage · 4min 🖥Recette virale (test 18/09) · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 4 : sélection par événement · 1 passage · 9min 📱Challenge 5 : montés à la main · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 5 : le clip (salve 3) · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 5 : le clip (salve 2) · 1 passage · 8min 📱Challenge 5 : le clip · 1 passage · 8min 📱4TH PORTRAIT FINALL.mp4 · 1 passage · 9min 📱3RD VIDEO FINAL LONG FORMAT LAST.mp4 · 1 passage · 7min 📱FINAL EXPORT VID 2 LONG FORMAT .mp4 · 9 passages · 9min 📱lastedityeahyeah1stvid.mp4 · 2 passages · 12min 📱voir par lotvoir les 11 anciens lots
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"We are not good with that," she says about making videos
conceptreversal: buyer becomes hostQC 6.4/10ouverture 6.8/1022s
(original)
The pitch dies quietly; the owner hands the salesman a drink instead of a euro. | payoff: "We have our own application and website."
Juge : scrollStop 6 · originality 7 · payoff 7 · outcome 6 · conflict 6 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Offre chiffrée lisible, « your business today » reste large.
⚠ End on 'non-alcoholic beers', drop the 'thank you Sandra' button—it goes slack.
Pitched a tattoo artist a machine that makes his shorts.
conceptnear-success into silenceQC 6.9/10ouverture 6.5/10103s
(original)
A real shop, a real problem, a real handshake — and a callback that never comes. | payoff: He said come back tomorrow. He never called.
Juge : scrollStop 6 · originality 6 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 7 · shareability 6
Ouverture : Situation précise, « fix one problem » un peu générique.
⚠ Open on the handshake + '30,000 forints' overlay, not the rules card
I pitched him an AI shorts machine on the spot
conceptpitch → he asks price → number lands → sQC 4.8/10ouverture 6.5/1016s
(original)
One tattoo artist listens to the whole pitch, then asks the price himself — the second the number lands, the scene ends and so does the lead. | payoff: Long pitch. Polite exit. Same energy.
Juge : scrollStop 6 · originality 5 · payoff 4 · outcome 5 · conflict 4 · shareability 4
Ouverture : Situation originale, la promesse d'offre manque au bandeau.
⚠ Payoff is off-screen ('never called back') — cap at 4; drop or show ghosting on camera.
Would you pay a stranger 80€ to fix your shop today?
conceptreversal — seller becomes the one being QC 7.2/10ouverture 6.3/1015s
(original)
The full pitch dissolves in real time as the stranger takes over and starts recruiting a friend for Frank. | payoff: The offer is on the table. Now someone has to say yes.
Juge : scrollStop 7 · originality 8 · payoff 8 · outcome 7 · conflict 6 · shareability 7
Ouverture : Bandeau crie une menace floue, on ne sait pas ce qui est promis.
⚠ Cut coldopen rules card; open with 'HE STARTS PITCHING FOR ME' teaser then rewind.
30k forint fixed, whatever it takes : can I bring her customers?
concepthidden-constraint → non-cash consolationQC 7.9/10ouverture 5.5/1029s
(original)
Sandra listens to the full pitch, already has her own app, and closes the pitch not with a yes or a no but with a non-alcoholic beer. | payoff: She never said no. She never said yes either.
Juge : scrollStop 8 · originality 8 · payoff 8 · outcome 8 · conflict 7 · shareability 8
Ouverture : Bandeau parle prix horaire sans objet, hors contexte flou.
⚠ Open cold on the beer being poured, then flashback the pitch — hook the payoff up front.